Interesting Style -- more room for improvement
A very head-splitting, chaotic sound which is clearly your intention. The tone of the guitars has a very nasty quality. The drums could use more punch there is a lot of sound in the lower mid range that clashes with the bass. Is there a bass? The lower ranges of the song are like mud. The bass could be used a bit more creatively--the rest of the song has so much going for it in that department. The songs sections don't transition too well and are a bit sudden. None of the riffs ever resolve I think so the song builds up an assload of tension. I'm guessing that too is intentional. T
A fade-out is an odd way to end a song like this.