This is more like doom metal than classical
Once again, I love your guitar tone. However, the percussion gets annoying-- there's a lot of open high hats on the downbeats which gets a bit stale. Vocals would serve this song well--harsh or clean. Could use some bass and a strong lead.
I REALLY like the guitar tone. A little repetitive but it not too bad because that's kind of the idea.
Interesting Style -- more room for improvement
A very head-splitting, chaotic sound which is clearly your intention. The tone of the guitars has a very nasty quality. The drums could use more punch there is a lot of sound in the lower mid range that clashes with the bass. Is there a bass? The lower ranges of the song are like mud. The bass could be used a bit more creatively--the rest of the song has so much going for it in that department. The songs sections don't transition too well and are a bit sudden. None of the riffs ever resolve I think so the song builds up an assload of tension. I'm guessing that too is intentional. T
A fade-out is an odd way to end a song like this.
Thanks for the review.
Yes, alot is intentional and no, im not a musician by trade its just a hobby thingie going on.
Needs more effort.
It really isn't a dance song. The first 30 seconds mostly sounds silly. It does though have a good creepy quality but it sounds unfinished.
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